Does trump kno more than 50 vocabulary words or nah.
Let me tell you about words. I know words. I have the best words. People always ask me about words, and I tell ya. You look at what Hillary Clinton and Obama have done with words and it’s a total disaster. I’m gonna make America great again. I have tremendous words. We’re going to have so many words. It’s going to be a beautiful thing. Believe me.
The Shore of Limbo
Poetry about longing, nightmares and insanity, mostly expressed in the fine form of Shakespearean sonnets.Five Years of Fighting
Five years of fighting and I still stand strong
Two hundred million laboured beats passed by
And still my broken heart just beats along,
Still only spirits keep my spirit high.And yes, it gets more easy to forget,
Most easy to forget is why to live.
You give your best each single day, I bet,
But time will come when nothing’s left to give.Five years of fighting, and they took their toll.
I fought to live, to hate, even to spite.
Emotions that were too weak after all:
I’m old and bitter, tired of the fight.And truly can you call yourself alive
When highest hope is simply to survive?
Five Years of Fighting
Five years of fighting and I still stand strong
Two hundred million laboured beats passed by
And still my broken heart just beats along,
Still only spirits keep my spirit high.And yes, it gets more easy to forget,
Most easy to forget is why to live.
You give your best each single day, I bet,
But time will come when nothing’s left to give.Five years of fighting, and they took their toll.
I fought to live, to hate, even to spite.
Emotions that were too weak after all:
I’m old and bitter, tired of the fight.And truly can you call yourself alive
When highest hope is simply to survive?
Five Years of Fighting
Five years of fighting and I still stand strong
Two hundred million laboured beats passed by
And still my broken heart just beats along,
Still only spirits keep my spirit high.
And yes, it gets more easy to forget,
Most easy to forget is why to live.
You give your best each single day, I bet,
But time will come when nothing’s left to give.
Five years of fighting, and they took their toll.
I fought to live, to hate, even to spite.
Emotions that were too weak after all:
I’m old and bitter, tired of the fight.
And truly can you call yourself alive
When highest hope is simply to survive?
a) because that would not be avant-grade
b) how is any of that different than tumblr
*blows vape rings into the air
Let’s all hang and get high on sonnets.
Ok guys, this is the big one I’ve been teasing for the last month or so. I’ve put so much work into this it’s ridiculously and I still don’t like where it is. But this is the first one. This is not the top studio quality song, this is the one I’ll be looking back on, laughing about how much I changed.
Please speak your mind about this. Any comment is appreciated. Hell, tell me you hate my voice, I certainly do so myself after listening to it over and over again. Also, I will dedicate a poem to the first person to overanalyze the lyrics.
Beat:
www.rappers.in/de/beat-189856.htmlLyrics:
Hello!
This rap was SO cool! At first, I was very unsure but as it progressed I found that I quite liked it! It almost reminds me of slam poetry or such.First, the tone. Your voice was very interesting which gave a very cool feel to it, since it was almost a drawl. It kind of made it feel more formal than other raps. Also, I liked how you switched the pace of the rapping frequently, although I suppose that’s a normal rap thing. I like to listen to rap but I rarely analyze it, so I suppose this review might not be much good.
Next, the lyrics. I couldn’t hear them all due to the pace which as I said, often became quite fast but from what I could hear, I liked. The rap contained interesting language and some cool metaphors from what I could hear and it gave the whole thing such a unique vibe!
Lastly, my suggestions (which are few because I enjoyed this so much). Although it could have just been the quality of the microphone (or my speakers) the words came out quite fuzzy so possibly if you re-recorded this you could make an attempt to speak a bit more clearly? Also, I feel the ending of the actual rap could be a bit more monumental- Mayne try to build up the beat or speak faster or louder? Something to give it that extra oomph, some extra emotion. Lastly, although I liked it, I wasn’t quite positive if the background beat fit in with the rest of the vibe that I was getting from this song.
As I said, I know pretty much nada about rap, so this comment t could just be a bunch of bull. Anyway, I hope that it was slightly helpful, at least! And again…. AWESOME SONG!!!!!
Thanks for the words on my rap. You’re absolutely right. I do hate the way my voice sounds at some times and the ending, although it was supposed to be faster, is just not powerful enough. If I had the time, I would have taken another month of vocal training before putting this out, but I’m going on vacation and wanted to get at least a first version of this out of my head so I can really enjoy the trip and also gather some feedback on if and how to proceed.
The if being answered with a clear yes from your comment and a few others, the how will probably mean looking into getting a different mic (this one was borrowed from a friend) , rerecording this piece when I’m back from Thailand and working on new material then. Also, being more selective with beats, this was all a kind of fast and loose experiment. I do enjoy this style of more-loose-than-sonnets-more-formal-than-rap.
Ok guys, this is the big one I’ve been teasing for the last month or so. I’ve put so much work into this it’s ridiculously and I still don’t like where it is. But this is the first one. This is not the top studio quality song, this is the one I’ll be looking back on, laughing about how much I changed.
Please speak your mind about this. Any comment is appreciated. Hell, tell me you hate my voice, I certainly do so myself after listening to it over and over again. Also, I will dedicate a poem to the first person to overanalyze the lyrics.
Beat:
www.rappers.in/de/beat-189856.htmlLyrics:
Seems like everyone’s struggling with number seventy-six.
http://allanegory.tumblr.com/post/149878998175/allanegory-ok-guys-this-is-the-big-one-ive